Quell Hour Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Quell Hour

Rating: 5.0


Every night left a day behind
Every day had a soul to hide
One is happy, perfect
One is void support
A seamless time chasing
A vehicle went past leaving all behind….

Who had etched this figure for me?
Who had seen this pallid by and by?
What a measured biography of time
An echoed chase ripping the air between….

11th Dec2008

Thursday, December 11, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: leaving
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

emotions cooling down...disgust hotting up...excellent word selection for etching out your imageries deep...the vehicle allegory is excellent...good work, Mousumi...10

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Shymal Chakraborty 13 December 2008

After reading your best creation I have landed into a city of emotion.....Asadharan...shyamal.

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