Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Quenched Thirst. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brimming with care, prepared is our love-cup.

Thirst quenches deeper now nectar runs clear.
Not wanting to waste in sips, I drink up.
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 15 August 2009

your thirst has been quenched, but your heart is afire your dressed for the night, but not to retire! your heart I feel beating and breathing is deep your ready for bed, but not to sleep

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C. P. Sharma 04 August 2009

Fay, It is written with all sweetness. Call it luck or God's grace! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Of fear and fright there is no trace Heavenly bliss brightens the face Successes in all spheres embrace Love comes to life in flowery vase CP

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Tsira Goge 04 August 2009

Swallow to glassy dregs, and unfearful That love will taste bitter after such draught Settles deep into soul, feel emboldened.. .................................................. It's nice, Fay.. 10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Lynda Robson 04 August 2009

Tender love poem, well done Fay 10 Lynda xx

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Vaibhav Pandey 04 August 2009

an excellent poem ma'm...very passionate and beautiful...10

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Ian Bowen 04 August 2009

Fay, top class piece of work. Loved this one with a passion.10 Regards, Ian

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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