Question Poem by Shadow Girl

Question

Rating: 4.8


I have this question
that I think about
day in day out.

This question
is on my mind
Night and day

My life goes by
so slowly as I think
of this one question

This question is
when will it ever
be enough?

I've had a boyfriend
but I wonted more
when will it be enough

I've got nothing now
but I still wont more
when will it be enough

Now I realize I had
the answer all the time
me, just me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iron Panda 23™ 10 March 2010

hmmm.....i say its time to find...the answer! !

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Zechariah Houchins 10 March 2010

excellent work i believe youre doing a good job

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Shadow Wolf 10 March 2010

I think we all have that question on our minds. Good work otherwise.

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Alex Medvedev 21 March 2012

simple, but so true!

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Stella Mary 03 January 2012

You're poem is okay....... but yo still can write long poems

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Snap, what a great wite, S.G. your very good. from H.P.

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Dale Garris 17 March 2010

the question is TO oursevles FROM ourselves and ONLY we can answer. here we are, all human and stuff, but yet with so much wisdom within, the answer lies in trying to stop hiding from our fears that we cover with ego and realizing we are all vulnerable and frail but at the same time BUILT LIKE A BRICK WALL.....

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Chidori Storm 16 March 2010

I have felt that way before. And the only answer I can come up with is, when you've finally found what you are truly looking for and what you truly want the most. That's what I've learned. Great poem. I hope you find what you're looking for. I know I have.

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