Quiescence In Me Poem by Helaman Del Castillo

Quiescence In Me

Rating: 5.0


*Please, hold me dear
I can't sleep well
Without your hand so near
That I can reach and feel.

**I am just here
Please know, I'm not leaving you my dear
Watch me, I am just near
I'm not leaving you my dear.

***Hands intertwined
As breaking dawn approaches
'Til one hand left behind
Twain of them were at peace.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
...Wish I could hold your hand forever as a source of tranquility...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manleh Castillo 10 September 2012

...thanks for the comment jane...i hope you can relate to this as soon as you catch the big picture of it.. :)

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 08 September 2012

your hand- I touched your hand...: D d man ko karelate ani Manleh.. but it sounds good though..abab, aaaa, cdcd.. keep writing your heart out.

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