Quiet Songs Poem by Smoky Hoss

Quiet Songs



This morning snow is laying on roof tops
like sheet music waiting to be sung.
A chill in the news,
John Prine is dead.
Snow flakes falling, so slow,
as if lost, absently left to wander.
A lonely, looking face I find
in my coffee cup;
I thought I saw him smile,
maybe even wink - I'm not sure...
An old tree just outside the window pane
waves a long branch my way
pointing toward the earth,
as if telling me; Hey,
come over here, you've got to see this!
At the window I look,
beyond the 'pain'
below the tree
upon the earth, I see
a small flower has risen up...
gazing, I take another drink,
this time I do see,
him looking back at me
smiling...

Quiet Songs
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 26 May 2020

wow, smoky! great opening simile. before reading this i didn't know or hadn't heard of john prine, so i'm likely missing a lot in this poem. i'm not in ph much these days, and i'm guessing you're not either. if/when you read this, here are my wishes and prayer for you. -glen

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 April 2020

wow poetry now do read moms smiles please poetess

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