Quilting Comments

Loved the title of your poem, and loved the use of the word 'quilt' in the very first line. I hate to point out others' oversights, but I think if you revisit your poem and edit these two words, the poem would be more meaningful: 'Shores splashing my bear feet' - Will 'bear' be 'bare' here? 'Setting at the window charmed' - Will 'Setting' be 'Sitting' here? Pardon me if I am being too nosy. 'Embracing the desiring words Succulent to the tongue of life' Is a beautiful expression that I liked very much. If you can make time, please read a few of mine too and say a word or two as feedback.