Quit Poem by jon crowell

Quit

Rating: 5.0


quit trying to die because you have no one
i try becouse i never was alive
quit playing games with my heart and mind
i wont because i love torture
quit trying to lie to me
i never lie i hate
quit with suicide
never thats my life
quit i will never talk
go a head i will lead you with a flock
quit treating me like a dog
never you had it comming and now you will learn to obey my evrey word

Wednesday, April 22, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,games,suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MANDY Loves life 09 June 2009

its really good and really creative and i like it alot! ! !

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cool... i too like how it seems to be two people in the poem.. very creative....

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Dakotas Angel 14 May 2009

I liked it how you answered back as if their were two people in this, good work

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