Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,400 Points (India)

Quixotic - Poem by Vishal Sharma

Our love proliferated like a wind arrow
And we hate Narcissism to its level
My myopic eyes gather clouds of love
You exacting behaviour puts dusk before me
Grew with an acrid taste; It was harsh again
To be oblivious is to be forgetful or unaware
Wipe out the mutual rancor among idle souls.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and art

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Quixotic by Vishal Sharma

  • Rajnish Manga (11/7/2015 12:55:00 AM)


    This seems to me the outcome of mutual distrust between two once loving hearts. Now, there is an urgent need to sit together to sort out differences. Why to be quixotic? Very nicely penned.
    My myopic eyes gather clouds of love
    You exacting behaviour puts dusk before me
    Wipe out the mutual rancor among idle souls.
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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/6/2015 8:39:00 AM)


    Love is so soft, quit using heavy words and make your poem fly like a feather. Wise diction though. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 6, 2015



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