You Are My Dark Choclate

Packed in the wrapper
you do appear,
with some melted face
with my long gaze
and so tasty to eat
so nasty to heat
and clumsy enough
to look at you
and sticking to my lips
between them you slips
and lost in my mouth
and again feel me thirst
that you are again gone
and i muddling my head
though about your shape
and about your witty nose
and my last given rose
that you are my fairy
and the rumours about
you i hate,
as you are my dark choclate.

Unwritten Soul 21 June 2013

Dark chocolate wrapped with mint spirit leaf...sound a nice romantic combination..what do u think hahaha joking..a very nice and young feel poem to me_Soul

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Poetheart Morgan 21 June 2013

100% cocoa. Here in Brazil we understand well these effects that it causes on us. Very good poet.

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Sekharan Pookkat 21 June 2013

I like your dark chocolate But keep your teeth away from it.Red lips will turn into black- It is not good

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David Wood 21 June 2013

Not a bad poem. Try writing a five stanza poem along the same lines.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 October 2015

So tasty to eat; when, love calls. Nice work

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

you are my dark chocolate sweet thought and good taste in candy.

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Kelly Seale 22 June 2013

mmmm, Tastey Write! Very good Vishal! ; -) Kelly.

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Simran Arora 21 June 2013

Mast h.....likd d rymng, styl.... :)

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Farah Ilyas 21 June 2013

too romantic poem, very audacious in nature, well done

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