'Rage' Poem by David Jericho

'Rage'



Corrupted by the world around
Sickened by the smell
I was brave enough to fight
But yet again I fell
Beaten, Bruised I almost quit
The rage inside me grew
Hurt like hell, but man they fell
Now there days are threw

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 20 February 2009

Aside from the spelling of the last word, I can't complain about this very much. It is not crystal clear what the message is. But I can suppose it has something to do with fighting back. I hope so, anyway. GW62

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