The Poem I Bled Poem by David Jericho

This is a fine poem, but you should never use the same word as an end rhyme. It defeats the purpose. If that can be corected, you have a nice little poem here. I like it very much. GW62

very nice write! ! ! enjoy it very much...can feel the emotions jumpin off the pages! ! ! and can relate to this soo much..if you read just a few of my poems you'll c what i mean.....keep inkin them pages man! ! ! 10 hands down for me! ! ! Brian