Rain Poem by Javier Falcon

Rain



As I walk through this maze,
I sense my whole body drenched,
in a holy water which gives me peace,
and opens the door to relaxation.
Letting me stand here alone, yet not quite.

As it gently caressing my skin,
as it floats its way from the heavens,
soaking all my worries astray.
Giving nostalgic thoughts of the past,
which comfort me quite so well.

As I listen to the rain fall, I hear a voice,
and a shape appears in the drops,
it seems to call out to me,
with a very peaceful intention.
And there sink into a whirlpool of memories.

As of those which I had with you,
right here, in this same spot.
When I looked in your beautiful eyes,
saying from my heart, I love you;
and we held each other ever so tightly.

As I keep looking back, they soak away,
in this rain which won't stop,
the only things which reminds me of you,
keeping the moment alive.
Regretting the moment which I let you go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

awwww.. regret is a STRONG emotion.. and is my favorite it write about.. very very good :) x3, mill

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Alyza RealOne 01 July 2008

thats so pretty good job :)

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Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
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