Rain Poem by M.. ROHITH

Rain

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Rain fell outside as I began to write...


You are a postmodernalist Monalisa
to my surrealist heart.
Sitting in the pavilion made of glasses
seeing mans evolution from a monkey
dissolving love in our hearts
seeing mans evolution to a warrior
dreaming darkness
painting you with love
trying to make Da Vinci jealous
with that Monalisa.
You, being a rebel
started a rebellion in my heart
generated power and gave energy
to write this.
I read the diary of your dreams
and filled my pen with
those dreams instead of ink.
You are ever twinkling star
and im a fragrant filled flower.
Though i know i cant catch you,
i love you.
My thoughts blocked by your love
and cant write of anything other than you
and only you.
You are a spark of current that flow
in my poetry
and treats everyone that read my poems
with a shock.
I see you in my poems and
feel you in imagination.
I talk to you in my dreams
and wanna meet you on the land of lovers.
Until then
good bye.
I will be waiting for you there.


Its raining inside.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 02 June 2009

Good poem on love feelings, Rohith...sweet and sour...so natural in true love relations...the way you commenced and ended your write is really good...outside rain moving towrds 'inside'...10

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