Rain In The Deep Poem by Ovison Nita

Rain In The Deep

Rating: 4.3


I feel a strange wind blowing with a sharp edge, calling and beckoning on thunder, i couldn't get a glimpse, until i was gripped, fire in my veins, higher than my rage, hot ice visits in an impromptu style, a harder tour embarks, falling waters envelope the depths, planely submits to deadlier storm i succumb, as flashes of cold fire and hot rain meet my face.

Tuesday, July 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,rain,wind
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when the rain falls down with all her strength.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ovison Enita 11 July 2013

Yea indeed the sky falls!

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Dave Walker 10 July 2013

A fine poem, the sky opens and the rain falls.

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Dinesan Madathil 10 July 2013

A good poem celebrating the festivity of rain written in precise format..

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