Dandy leo jr.

Rookie (April 24 of 1979 / Weslaco, tx)

Rain Tear - Poem by Dandy leo jr.

A tear of rain; people show you feign,
A tear so much extraviour and in pain,

You left the heavens in sole purpose,
You hope to be looked upon like eye in circus,

You are so apart not knowing where to land,
Will it be the greenest prairies, or to the sand,

I know your eloquence, so follow your sequence,
So small, so subtle, iam graceful to you from hence,

Not a thunder, not a wave, not a thickness of water,
But a great tear that comes from above, I will not let you falter,

Come to me my dearest tear of rain, I will place a flower,
A flower before you, to give life, and this is your hour,

And the flower will tell the story of a journeys tear,
So that has given me a joyful tear.


Comments about Rain Tear by Dandy leo jr.

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/31/2011 6:45:00 AM)


    It's a great poem! ! I like the rhyme-pattern! !
    Poignant write! !
    Tears always show the hurt of heart/
    Top marks! !
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  • (12/31/2011 6:35:00 AM)


    The poem is beautiful and rhythmic.I enjoyed reading this work. Rekhamandagere (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 28, 2011


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