Sunday, October 6, 2019

Rainbow In The Sky Comments

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there is a rainbow in the sky
rain is gone and a soft light appears
the wind blows free and birds begin to fly
and water hangs on to fronds like drop of tears
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2019

The inscription of rain is so delight and pleasurable. As rainbow appears after rain wind blows free, plays music with swinging trees and birds begin to fly. Pigeons begin to coo from the cotes in the walls. So brilliantly you have captured the scenery after rain and rainbow in this poem captivatingly. The style of writing lines is nice to look at.Thank you dear Panda babu for sharing this beautiful poem. Sure ten.

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Kingsley Egbukole 06 October 2019

Rain and rainbow have some relationship. Beautiful. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH. Kingsley Egbukole.

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