Raincloud. Poem by Jon Lloyd

Raincloud.

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you are my raincloud,
my dark grey raincloud.
you just depress me,
when skies are blue.

you'll never know just
how much I loathe you.
unless, of course,
you hate my guts too.

©2006 Jon Lloyd

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nicola Burkett 28 November 2006

He He....I agree with Eden, i found myself reading it with the 'You are my sunshine' tune in my head...a fine write Sincerely Nickie x x

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Eden Sheffroth 23 November 2006

lol i like it good twist on 'you are my sunshine' giggle giggle! ! ! ! Thanks for the comment on my poem too hun! ! ! I appreciate it! !

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