Raining Ouside – Survival Weather Poem by Margaret Alice

Raining Ouside – Survival Weather

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It’s raining ouside – survival weather, saving our lives
but overcast weather makes me feel bad, I need the
sun to feel better; whenever I am down I go outside
and lie in the sun, when it’s rainy like now, there’s
no hope, all falls apart, the negative side of my mind
turns up, and I can’t change it into happy and content
regardless of what I do, say or eat – the only thing that
helps is sunshine, but rainy weather bringing the
water we need, is necessary – so I have to keep my
sadness inside while applauding the good effects
of rain in our lives…

Saturday, October 6, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: sun,sunshine,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Isabella De calo 19 August 2018

This poem is really good and i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 💕👌

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Isabella De calo 19 August 2018

This poem is really good and i love it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 💕👌

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Alison Cassidy 06 October 2007

Oh Alice, I sooooooooooo agree with this one. The amount of sun on one's back makes such a difference to the amount of water one sees in the half filled glass. Great piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

Pretoria - South Africa
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