Razorblades Poem by Kooky Kailey

Razorblades

Rating: 4.5


the razor in my hand
my wrist dripping with blood
all over me, as thick as mud
how could they do this
all i want is his loving kiss
they took him away
this is the ultimate price to pay
as i put the gun up to my head
this is what i said
dig my grave and dig it deep
place a stone upon my feet
and on the stone place a dove
to show the world i died for love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saint Cynosure 13 July 2008

Hey I like this a lot... I thought I would tell, you to keep it up. Let all the world know how you feel.

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Dislocated Heart 11 July 2008

i agree with Faith Toney. but its beautiful the way you wrote it. i like how it flows.

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Faith Toney 11 July 2008

thats so sad..and yet great i loved it

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