Friday, December 19, 2014

Re: Your Poetic License Renewal Application Comments

Rating: 4.0

It has come to our attention that your License was suspended-
for failing to stop, within lines, for needed punctuation.
Your casual allusions to things and times of yore
Are confusing to the reader and frankly mark you as a bore.
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John F. McCullagh
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Lyn Paul 19 December 2014

Forget the punctuation, we all need the humour. Great flow. You could just put return to sender on the letter. That will keep them busy.

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