You asked for my sincere comments
hence
first...fell breast.
for fell did you mean full?
second
poetry should be only 14 to 19 lines
else many will only say
well done
without even reading a word
and will
as you also say
read me I will return the what ever
favour etc
Some poets here only keep requesting
read me, read me
and you answer/thank also
Actually reads must be divided by two
But ask all just not to say
well done
good poem
but give a constructive rendition
of what is the depth of the poem...
Hope justice I have done
Now you may continue
Hope you are successful too
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes. The modern poetry wants critical reviews. As the poet asks. I agree with you Sir. It's a good subject to ponder over.