Readers Are Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Readers Are

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I love and like
When they dislike
My presentation
And raise questions

I silently acknowledge
And feel as if in cage
New bird just starting to fly
I think of one more m try

They are my feelings
I feel proud in evening
When day passes of with joy
I take pen in hand and enjoy

I care for their comments
But remain absent
If pointer comes to my creation
I take not and try for more elevation

It is sort of inner excitement
That makes some movement
To write and explain
What is there in mind to maintain?

I shall flow with my thought
If ever it is caught
For controversy and praise
I shall make no chase

Readers are best judge
They will question and manage
It is our duty to convince
One they show interest or evince

Thursday, June 12, 2014
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I love and like When they dislike

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Interesting... Collette Slater4 minutes ago It was a nice poem to read...

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good flow Robyn2 minutes ago good writing but I didn't connect emotionally to this poem Comment +1 ..

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very good perspective view point Susan WallLess than a minute ago I admire your way of seeing things.

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Well said sir ;) 17 minutes ago by DARK ANGEL | Reply

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welcome jairam tiwari, Marv Borgman, mericel remirez, rahman msotafiz, obet calingo, ade caparas, laxmi locaan rqzul.. Just now · Unlike · 1

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welcome Neneth Ramiro Rondera, Pramila Khadun Just now · Unlike · 1

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Pramila Khadun Lovely poem Hasmukh, I enjoyed reading it. 7 mins · Unlike · 1

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Marv Borgman Excellent! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Hasmukh Mehta welcom jairam tiwari, pen pen b and ade caparas Just now · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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