Ready. Aim. Fire! ! Comments

Wow. That is amazing. The anger and hatred, but the want to make things better. I love it! Also, the commanding tone it takes at the end. It's unexpected. 'Lock and load boys... Ready. Aim. Fire! ' I've read over it a couple of times, and each time I read it, I get a new surge of... of, eh, I can't explain it. I don't think it could have been written better.. This is your best one yet. I absolutely love it, sweets. [See? I'm only an idiot when I talk. =D] -Babs XD