Real Set Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Real Set

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Everybody likes rising sun
The day is starting with fun
With high hopes of getting well
So many happy stories to tell

As the day advances
Man feels his importance
His excellence
And dominance too

The day brings him into lime light
His real place after graceful fight
The hard work has placed him on the top
His march ahead has remained non-stop

The sun set provides same importance
It is one of the most unforgettable scenes
No one can forget last reddishness
The sun brought through out the day for us

It is time to return
Wind up the net and turn
To its original fold for next day
To find new venture another day

It has its own charm
The evening is beautiful and warm
What a memorable return journey for all!
To retire in safe refuge and respond nice and cool

Tuesday, March 25, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Gail Desautels Too many he's... about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

Makes me wanna go outside Josh Reyes17 minutes ago Good length. Good wordplay. Can be thought of in so many different ways. i like it. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

Real Set Vera Sidhwa20 minutes ago I like your poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

Everybody likes rising sun The day is starting with fun

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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