Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,587 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Reallyassertive - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Lightening in sky
Make us to try
With determined bid
To think and lead

We can read
When night is dead
There is pin drop silence around
With thoughts to roam freely around

With plight
Or feeling not right
It makes way ahead for next day’s arrival
We take it really casual

The sky is open and vast
Where you can last
with ambition in earnest
to think and serve best

so person is ready
with fear out mind and not feeling scary
it is real and positive
when you are really assertive

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Sonnet


Comments about Reallyassertive by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/13/2015 2:40:00 AM)


    welcome Suresh Vaishnav likes this
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/13/2015 2:38:00 AM)


    Benedicta Ruiz Thank you for your very positive words, in a rhyming verse, Hasmukh Mehta.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/12/2015 11:50:00 PM)


    Lightening in sky
    Make us to try
    n
    n
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 12, 2015



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