Monday, July 10, 2006

Recluse Comments

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Do you think it's enough
a single dropp of rain to clean
the dirty clothes and his soul?
The ragamuffin was in a rainforest
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nimal dunuhinga
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Goldy Locks 12 July 2006

niice description of a recluse, Nimal. i've met a few & this fits. 'the rainforest of his youth..' & the last line - was a great close. it does come down to vanity. Sus.

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Sandra Fowler 10 July 2006

Solitary sorrow, beautifully expressed. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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