Tuesday, August 19, 2008

Red Dirt Patch Comments

Rating: 5.0

Red dirt patch amongst the trees
Dead trees scattered all around
So many thoughts came to mind
As I looked at this blood-red ground
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Marilyn Lott
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Kesav Easwaran 21 August 2008

'This land was constantly rearranged! ' a beautiful line that reflects the reality of this universe...matter there is getting beautifully rearranged by the Divine who maintains the equilibrium constant...a good emphatic write, Marilyn...10/10

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Thad Wilk 19 August 2008

Ahh, but this red dirt land it still stands And thou with 'barren trees' It will always hold In it's blood red ground Many fond and welcomed - memories! *10*! Splendid read Marilyn! Friend Thad

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