Red Rain Poem by Michelle Kafka

Very beautiful and romantic description of the blissful union. Pleasant sensuality oozing from the poem.

Vermillion, coral, and persian sunset mingle casting a soft glow on two united red........... .. unequaled matrix of hearts in unison as blue sky by the glow of full moon.............wonderful portray of sweet love in paints of color scintillating, ingeniously wrought by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

Red omamoni falls from fingertips Male aura plunges female's aura Vermillion, coral, and persian sunset mingle casting a soft glow on two united red auras Male and female auras see and sound red. sweet very sweet poem, the way you expressed it is really heartfelt and meaningful enough..idea is thoughful and the composition is very much sweet..well done and like the way you write, , hope you never stop writing..best of luck

Fire engine rose petals ebb Persimmon embers die down Sultry cerise lips pout Red wine hungrily consumed what a sweet poem is this one and the composition of wrds are giving multiples meanings to your verses you combined here..the flwo is good but the idea is again deep and deep way tocuhing one..well done.10/10

nice poem, well penned with deep ideas................10

Lol poetry is art indeed. Just took a bow. Thanks for the comment Patrick.

Ah ha! and who said poetry was not art. Take a bow Michelle brilliant

Thank you for your comments. This poem was inspired by nature's red rain and an artist friend - Brodi Surrealist's colour choice.