Deepthi Vincent

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Red Rose - Poem by Deepthi Vincent

Do you remember the rose
That you found in a crystal vase
Beside your office work desk
On your last birthday

Do you remember the rose
Its color, so deep and vibrant
The smooth, velvet petals
And mesmerizing fragrance

I remember the rose
That I found in your dust bin
Along with heaps of garbage
Still in its glory

A rose as beautiful as your smile
With petals soft as your touch
A red rose with color of your lips
And scent of your breath

I still remember everything
I cannot forget anything
Do you know why?
Coz, that rose was ‘my heart'


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  • (11/22/2011 11:02:00 AM)


    elegant...keep writing (Report) Reply

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  • (5/28/2010 11:11:00 AM)


    Deepthi

    Hats off.......

    You have great great potential
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  • (5/20/2010 11:59:00 AM)


    Good poem Deepthi...good use of metaphor...rose is the symbol of love and heart...well, at times it bleeds red...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 12, 2012


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