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Relationships Are Like Public Toilets...

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You said relationships
Are the same like public toilets.
One who is in desperately wants to come out
And the one waiting out
Eager enough to get in.

But which relationship you talk about?
And your comparative philosophy
Will not appeal to every relationship..
A parental relationship is exceptional
Once you go in you need not come out
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Mordernpoet 14 April 2019
U value nothing no relationship
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Sabitha S Geethall 03 May 2011
u r telling an universal phenomena in a nice way, , very true..most of us love ourselves only..nwadays..it's just 'Me, Myself, and I' only..
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blank blank 20 April 2011
A mystical relationship with God Bounds you and me in divinity And when once in there is no out sweet
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 20 April 2011
Nicely done. Very well conceived. I think there are many other places except toilet which we get in and get out. They may be shrines, Malls etc. but toilet is not a good comparison. So far as the poem is concerned, its really good to read it. Nice write with an odd title. Thanks for sharing.....
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