Sunday, May 3, 2020

Relief-Line>>> Comments

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outstretch arms along street
begging for relief whole day
screams, unnecessary exchange
heated words rumble constantly
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Manonton Dalan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2020

outstretch arms along street begging for relief whole day screams, unnecessary exchange heated words rumble constantly sun not very forgiving either cooking their skin, also sweat.....fantastic beginning with touching expression. Beautiful poem.10

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Manonton Dalan

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