Remember Bali Poem by Ave Lilik

Remember Bali



Remember Bali-
of you and me
and the fields of paddy
in Ubud's glory?

Remember Nanggu-
and the sea so blue
you were gazing through
and how i picture you?

Remember the Lagoon-
how you sang in the moon
how we were in tune
and it rained so soon?

Remember Novotel-
the heaven we dwell
and dreams they sell
how come it's farewell?

Tuesday, November 1, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell,remember
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 01 November 2005

I've been to Ubud and to the Borders Bookstore in Friendship Heights. I wish your poem had conveyed more of the specialness of Bali or what happened to you there. Regards.

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