Remembered Poem by Venus April

Remembered

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I want to be remembered as…
The women that could brighten everybody's day
When she can't even brighten hers

I want to be remembered as the women
That makes you feel happy
When she can't even make herself happy

I want to be remembered
As the women that everybody is proud of
When she isn't proud of herself

I want to be remembered
As the women with a beautiful smile
But have hundreds of scars

I want to be remembered
As the women everybody, thought of as courageous
When she can't even say those three words

I want to be remembered as the women who is loved
And cherished…
But always chooses the loneliness

I want to be remembered
As the women who everybody thought, knew her life
When she doesn't even know the definition of life

I want to be remembered
As the women who never gave up
Even though she gave up on life and love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Venus April 03 August 2012

Thank you very much.

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Vipins Puthooran 02 August 2012

I want to be remembered As the women who never gave up Even though she gave up on life and love! ! I like this line very much! ! ! Excellent poem! ! ! ! top marksss

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

I want to be remembered as… The women that could brighten everybody's day When she can't even brighten hers started off on deeply felt depressing lines.....and ended on a positive note..liked yer poem blessings

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Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

Well, I would remember you as a woman who can effect others just by a pen. You would get them all for yourself, just want them, and you'll get them.

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