Remembered Poem by Venus April

Remembered

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I want to be remembered as…
The women that could brighten everybody's day
When she can't even brighten hers

I want to be remembered as the women
That makes you feel happy
When she can't even make herself happy

I want to be remembered
As the women that everybody is proud of
When she isn't proud of herself

I want to be remembered
As the women with a beautiful smile
But have hundreds of scars

I want to be remembered
As the women everybody, thought of as courageous
When she can't even say those three words

I want to be remembered as the women who is loved
And cherished…
But always chooses the loneliness

I want to be remembered
As the women who everybody thought, knew her life
When she doesn't even know the definition of life

I want to be remembered
As the women who never gave up
Even though she gave up on life and love

Tuesday, July 31, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: women
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Venus April 03 August 2012

Thank you very much.

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Vipins Puthooran 02 August 2012

I want to be remembered As the women who never gave up Even though she gave up on life and love! ! I like this line very much! ! ! Excellent poem! ! ! ! top marksss

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Saadat Tahir 02 August 2012

I want to be remembered as… The women that could brighten everybody's day When she can't even brighten hers started off on deeply felt depressing lines.....and ended on a positive note..liked yer poem blessings

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Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

Well, I would remember you as a woman who can effect others just by a pen. You would get them all for yourself, just want them, and you'll get them.

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