Monday, February 19, 2007

Remembering Henry David Thoreau's The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

she signs herself in
and out of the sky
a vast domain she
has with her kins
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john tiong chunghoo
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Sandra Fowler 19 February 2007

Thoreau's poem may have inspired you. But this poem is uniquely your own. Fine work, John. Warm regards, Sandra

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Alicia Patti 19 February 2007

Amazing and so well done, especially the following quatrain: to keep the key to enter her throne a secret she takes a new signature each day to her coveted seat Your imagery is impeccable. I really enjoyed this read. More like this, please! best, alicia

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