Remembering My Dad Poem by Tuwa Noor

Remembering My Dad

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The wind enters through the open windows of the south,

Shakes the mosquito curtain like a wave,

The fireflies twinkle in the blind dark night.

Eyes are wide open, would not fall asleep as easily.



Father returns home on the weekend from his work far away.

He tries to catch the last bus of the day.

It's been a long night.

The night becomes deep with the heavy layers of darkness.

The stars in the sky are like the enormous tiny flowers in the grass.

The jack hauls in the forest far away.

The dogs bark them those dwell in the backyard.

The scared bats fly away of the Polyalthia tree with rush in their wings.

Dad may be lost in nowhere like a little boy!

Both eyes are swollen of weeping and crying.



If I knew he would be lost in the sky where the stars twinkle like the fireflies, in their mysterious Milky Way,

I'll leave his address on a piece of paper in the pocket of his brilliant white shirt, washed and ironed out from the near by laundry shop.

Wednesday, November 28, 2018
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 November 2018

A heartfelt rendition nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Poignant and very passionate write. Thanks for sharing Tuwa.

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Susan Williams 28 November 2018

Wow! ! It is hard to post a comment on a poem when the site jumps every few seconds so I am pasting and copying everything I can. Y - -very nicely done.. sharing. There's something magical about creating a scene out of words, isn't there?

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