........Reminiscing Autumn Love Poem by Not Long Left

........Reminiscing Autumn Love

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It was under this now burnt tree I buried you under
A pile of Autumn leaves, I rememer you sqealing
With the delight of a girl who had just found love.
That special moment that enables us to ignore
The dampness of the leaves, the slime and the dirt
Only thinking and feeling the utopia of the moment.
I fell onto and into you, and there on the blanket
Of season change we overlooked the fragility of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Francesca Johnson 07 November 2006

Oh, how those memories live on and on. I really enjoyed the abandonment of love in this poem, Vincent (or is it James?) Love, Fran xx

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