Remorse Poem by Harsh Joshi

Remorse

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When thou are upset with me,
when my soul burdened be.

Then I find the time,
being the same, As for mine,
Soul that looks never fine.
Joy, that never has pleasure's sign.

Thou! Friend, easily content,
Need no laws, to repent?

I dwelt alone,
in the world of moan
Untill thou came with your spark,
thou, took me out of moaning dark

When thou are upset
the world looks, As I never met,
with it's those happy moments,
which are now far behind
To see them, I with eyes, am still Blind! !

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 03 November 2015

Well, you had used the archaic language to good effect.. A nice read... Thanks for sharing Harsh :)

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Harsh Joshi 07 November 2015

Thank You so much...means a lot.. :)

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Kelly Kurt 02 November 2015

Nicely written, Harsh. Thanks

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Harsh Joshi 07 November 2015

Thank You for your valuable and motivational feedback..

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