Rename This Church Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Rename This Church



All sins may be named virtuous.
Sometimes to etch a touch into skin
Is the only way to truly repent.

The first pain is quick and sharp
But dirty revolutions are formed,
And it all feels like dying and being reborn.

Tuesday, October 25, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: sometimes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 25 October 2011

That first stanza does it for me, its brief but it conveys complete impact of what sounds like pain layerd with an element of enlightened cynicism. Great stuff

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Lenore Lee 25 October 2011

Dark and sensitive, totally perfect. I love this poem of frustration and pain.

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