Rendezvous Poem by D A Phinney

Rendezvous

Rating: 4.5


I see how she awaits atop the stair.
The attic door ajar uncombs her hair.
Bound in darkness, the oval of her face
Floats and sways above her formless trace.
The window frames a lonely star whose glow
Marks the parting spot that sleeps below.
I climb the heavy steps as shadows crawl
Down my shoulders, back and legs, consuming all.
And yet my fire rises with my height,
That coldly burns for her embrace of night.
A lightning flash reveals without excuse
Above a jagged crate: a ragged noose.
I stand upon my fate yoked to my love
And kick the world away. Wind wails above
That forlorn tomb that rests a mile afar;
Above it there, she waits atop the star.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gregory Gunn 08 March 2006

An extremely well-crafted iambic pentameter offering in the tradition of Edgar Allan Poe. Intense imagery throughout the piece. Loved 'And yet my fire rises with my height / That coldly burns for her embrace of night.' Also 'I stand upon my fate yoked to my love / And kick the world away. Wind wails above...'Mr. Phinney, you surely slew me with your eloquence. A monumental marvel! Gregory

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D A Phinney

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Ithaca, New York
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