Reparteeze Poem by shimon weinroth

Reparteeze

Rating: 3.2


impaled by a sharp tongue
whipped by reprimand
emotions come ustrung

cruel swordsman
defends the gibberish
of the mind

rapport, calms down, cools off
pause for a period,
reconciles the estranged

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 October 2008

Words don't come easy these days, but your visual style of writing, like using the swordman as a backdropp is genius.The sharp toungue as sharp as a sword, reprimanded by its touch! ! ! ! its a definitely an A + ABSOLUTE 10 for the wisdomry! ! ! You're a class of your own Shimon.am glad to know ya my bro. cheers, Sulaiman

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Goldy Locks 20 September 2007

regain. repent. retaliate. best care, sjg

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