Restless Heart Comments

So powerful and full of truth. Why should we have to dwell on just one person? lol 10/10, another favorite!

That was trully dope, Im kind of feeling that way now myself.

A restles heart usually comes when you are young, so enjoy it, yet be patient. Good comes to all who wait. You did a good job with the poem, i like the structure and rythem you are very good. I give you a 10. I would like a young persons opinion on my poem 'I want to Live' thank you. I will also read more of your poems as time allows.

Hi Megan, this is very well written in that you easily convey how much you will miss the person who's leaving but that you know life goes on and someone else will be on your mind. And the rhyme scheme is fluid, too. Great job!

absolutely love it! ....fantastic write! :)