dim light of cloudy storm
strong winds swept
drumming sounds of rain
dancing boughs of trees
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Mellifluously crisp, and smooth structure....resplendent imagework...Solid Crafting, indeed, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
Mellifluously crisp, and smooth structure....resplendent imagework...Solid Crafting, indeed, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
A beautiful poem, David. I especially like the line 'heartfelt winters warmth.' Many think of winter mostly in negative terms, but in fact, all seasons have their positive aspects in restoration of the earth. Thanks, an excellent write, , , ,10, Best regards, Richard
Nicely woven words washed perfect by your hand. Delightful read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX