Monday, March 10, 2008

Restoration Comments

Rating: 5.0

dim light of cloudy storm
strong winds swept
drumming sounds of rain
dancing boughs of trees
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David Taylor
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Ernestine Northover 10 March 2008

Nicely woven words washed perfect by your hand. Delightful read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Mellifluously crisp, and smooth structure....resplendent imagework...Solid Crafting, indeed, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Mellifluously crisp, and smooth structure....resplendent imagework...Solid Crafting, indeed, David! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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C.R. Clark 10 March 2008

A beautiful poem, David. I especially like the line 'heartfelt winters warmth.' Many think of winter mostly in negative terms, but in fact, all seasons have their positive aspects in restoration of the earth. Thanks, an excellent write, , , ,10, Best regards, Richard

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