Retired Poem by Percy Dovetonsils

Retired



It's so much easier
to write
outside that community
I was forced
to be a part of
to pay
my rent.

Ironic, really, because
my fellow galley slaves
loved literature,
or at least were literate,
and may have been trying
to write
themselves.

They couldn't help it
if the noise, the gasping, the panting,
the heavy stink of their sweat
while rowing,
their groaning
from the lash
laid on heavily, frequently,

made them
so distracting.

Saturday, August 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: teacher
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 29 August 2020

Made them so Distracting Like a preacher Trying to be a teacher This way i think we quickly realise the poem is about a teacher nay..a preacher. First time i read i did not realise it was about a teacher but may be i m just slow. My 2 cents

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