Retort Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Retort

Rating: 5.0


I shall only ask you once
he said.
If the answers no
our love is dead.

Then you must go
she did retort.
Self love is yours...
thrives in your thought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent poem with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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