Revelation Poem by Jamie Ries

Revelation



I look at myself in the mirror,
There's not much to look at here.
Inspect the angles of my hips,
One side, two sides, I let slip.

Examine my belly,
it's not flat,
It has some pudge,
I sure am fat.

Move up to my shoulders,
They're too wide,
Should I turn around and hide?
I look in my eyes.

Through them I see
I cannot be anyone else but me.
I love me,
Imperfect as you see,

Because flaws are beauty,
as a rose,
One thorn, two thorn,
Here it goes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

poetic in every way! ..............

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Trever Barlow 27 October 2009

You are beautiful Jamie! and We love you too!

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