Thursday, October 26, 2023

Riding A Bike Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm learning to ride a bike,
And I'm learning to fly on my own,
And I'm learning to sing, Not to cry,
when I fall,
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P. Praveen Kumar
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Richard Wlodarski 24 November 2023

Really love how the childlike innocence and spontaneity of this masterful poem ends up being a profound lesson of life. Such a joy to behold! Congrats Poet Kumar on POD!

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Congratulations, dear poet, on this wonderful poem being selected as POEM OF THE DAY. Nice poem exuding positive energy. All the best and welcome to PoemHunter.

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Bharati Nayak 24 November 2023

A beautiful poem with positive thoughts! Let me quote, 'And I'm learning to fly high, While, I speed through the hills of life, And I'm learning that it's much, Much easier to look ahead at my future path, Then looking in my mirror, To see the past.'

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