Riff On Allen Steble's 'There's A Fire Burning In My Eyes's Poem by David McLansky

Riff On Allen Steble's 'There's A Fire Burning In My Eyes's

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There’s a ember glowing in my eyes
That flickers in the chill
A light that threatens soon to die
If it were not for my will.

Your breath of love flows across my face
And drops a silent tear
Fearful that a sudden wind
Will make me disappear;

Yet that coal burns in my eye
Beneath a skin of ash,
Alive and trying not to die,
To be extinguished at the last;

My love tells me to please hold on
My eye blazes with desire
What will you do when I am gone
And my yearning soul expired?

You will live on as widows do
Remembering loving days
Recalling my burning love of you
Through a smoky haze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elaine Sept 14 August 2017

This poem is a stark reminder of the beauty of words you so masterfully orchestrate despite your life restraints! I am as always in awe and admiration of both the poet and the man Xo Elaine

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A very good poem, my friend. Keep writing.

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Katie Harrison 17 May 2013

A nice heartfelt poem. well written.

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Earl Clark 16 May 2013

A nice poem, thank you for sharing.

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