Vhia = Welcome to the Family
You radiate such sparkling joy
Your happiness contagious
A child surprised by some new toy
Your laughter is bodacious
You wear this talent unaware
Electrons fill the room
Remediall you charge the air
Dispelling clouds of gloom
You presence leaves an after-glow
A perfume heaven sent
Your smile a flower blooming slow
A lingering event
Wow this is a poem in great poetic diction and rendered sweet because of the babe's smile. How u employed electrond is superb! Nice to read u again. Hope u will too.
Wow this is awesome in poetic diction and sweet to read. To use electons in poem is great. Nice to read from u again. U may read mine too.
I love the idea of a smile being a lingering event! Beautiful! ! xo
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The last four lines should be in the face of new families looking for the perfect newborn congrats greeting card, I mean I know some poets would not want to hear this because they don't think greeting card work is poetry....and I also know you still wouldn't be too bothered to hear someone say so; =) A new birth is indeed a heavenly event, all mercy and grace for us, and a lingering event if we but let it be... just as it was sent.