Vhia, Welcome Poem by David McLansky

Vhia, Welcome

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Vhia = Welcome to the Family

You radiate such sparkling joy
Your happiness contagious
A child surprised by some new toy
Your laughter is bodacious

You wear this talent unaware
Electrons fill the room
Remediall you charge the air
Dispelling clouds of gloom

You presence leaves an after-glow
A perfume heaven sent
Your smile a flower blooming slow
A lingering event

Thursday, February 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nom Nada 26 June 2016

The last four lines should be in the face of new families looking for the perfect newborn congrats greeting card, I mean I know some poets would not want to hear this because they don't think greeting card work is poetry....and I also know you still wouldn't be too bothered to hear someone say so; =) A new birth is indeed a heavenly event, all mercy and grace for us, and a lingering event if we but let it be... just as it was sent.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 February 2015

Wow this is a poem in great poetic diction and rendered sweet because of the babe's smile. How u employed electrond is superb! Nice to read u again. Hope u will too.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 February 2015

Wow this is awesome in poetic diction and sweet to read. To use electons in poem is great. Nice to read from u again. U may read mine too.

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Elaine Sept 20 February 2015

I love the idea of a smile being a lingering event! Beautiful! ! xo

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