Sunday, June 4, 2017

Ripples Comments

Rating: 5.0

White clouds,
Morning breeze,
Ripples in the pond,
Dancing trees.
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Lamar Cole
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Valsa George 14 March 2019

Love leads us to a magnificent state when we will be able to see beauty in everything and everywhere! Lovely poem proclaiming the power of love!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2017

Love grows in morning breeze, in the ripples of ponds and streams or in the dancing trees under white clouds. When sunlight shimmers love becomes simmer if two hearts are separated. Woderful imaginary and imagery have been drawn here. Thank u dear Lamar for your astute composition. Full vote.

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