Ripples Poem by Angela Wybrow

Ripples

Rating: 4.8


Fish:
Dark, slender, uniformed shapes,
Circling round in the shallows;
They glide, seemingly effortlessly,
Yet invisible energy,
Created by their momentum,
Sends gentle ripples,
Each one perfectly symmetrical,
Emanating outwards,
Across the smooth surface
Of the water.

Ripples, which travel and grow
Larger and larger,
Before disappearing,
Only to form, once again,
Almost adjacent,
As the fish
Move quickly onwards
To form yet another circle.

I stand, stock still,
Watching:
Mesmerized -
Almost hypnotised;
I feel their motion
Soothe my heart and soul.

From time to time,
They break away
From the circle,
And, instead, dash and dart -
Always in the same direction;
Each following the others:
Safety in numbers.

I feel strangely emotional;
A deep thrill
Washes over me,
As they dart past my feet,
Only a metre away,
Across the soft, rippled sand,
Warmed by the
September sun.

Saturday, September 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,fish,nature,science,seaside
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lodigiana Poetess 14 September 2019

A most beautiful poem filled with wonderfully expressive language and vivid imagery..I really enjoyed reading this..10

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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 September 2019

You draw the reader in with your imagery. Wonderfully penned. I suppose the order you detail in the poem is far better than entropy. : -)

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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 September 2019

You draw the reader in with your imagery. Nicely done. I suppose order is better than entropy. : -)

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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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