Fish:
Dark, slender, uniformed shapes,
Circling round in the shallows;
They glide, seemingly effortlessly,
Yet invisible energy,
Created by their momentum,
Sends gentle ripples,
Each one perfectly symmetrical,
Emanating outwards,
Across the smooth surface
Of the water.
Ripples, which travel and grow
Larger and larger,
Before disappearing,
Only to form, once again,
Almost adjacent,
As the fish
Move quickly onwards
To form yet another circle.
I stand, stock still,
Watching:
Mesmerized -
Almost hypnotised;
I feel their motion
Soothe my heart and soul.
From time to time,
They break away
From the circle,
And, instead, dash and dart -
Always in the same direction;
Each following the others:
Safety in numbers.
I feel strangely emotional;
A deep thrill
Washes over me,
As they dart past my feet,
Only a metre away,
Across the soft, rippled sand,
Warmed by the
September sun.
You draw the reader in with your imagery. Wonderfully penned. I suppose the order you detail in the poem is far better than entropy. : -)
You draw the reader in with your imagery. Nicely done. I suppose order is better than entropy. : -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A most beautiful poem filled with wonderfully expressive language and vivid imagery..I really enjoyed reading this..10